controversy
The big poet debate
A controversy amongst three literary luminaries that is based 
on little facts, more hearsay, and exaggerated claims with no end in sight
By Wajid Ali Syed
This is a story about three giants of Urdu literature, who got embroiled in a bizarre controversy that, even though it’s very much real, seems a figment of the fertile imagination of the three luminaries — a poet, a critic, and a fiction writer. One commonality among them is their love and passion for the language; the other a facetious controversy that has bonded them together — mostly against their wishes. One is Shamsur Rahman Faruqi: the arch critic of the day, another is Intizar Hussain: the leading fiction writer of our times, and then the poet, Zafar Iqbal: Urdu’s foremost ghazal poet.

New lessons
Talbot’s approach, of going deeper into the past of Pakistan and the kind of state that was created needed to be examined, investigated and properly understood, is the right one
By Sarwat Ali
Ian Talbot has written extensively about Pakistan. In his latest publication ‘Pakistan: A New History’ he has actually levelled the reasons for most of the problems that Pakistan faced in history.
In that way, there is nothing new about the history of the country if one has to delve deep into the past to unearth the real causes for the disarray that the country is in it at present.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

 

controversy
The big poet debate 
A controversy amongst three literary luminaries that is based 
on little facts, more hearsay, and exaggerated claims with no end in sight
By Wajid Ali Syed

This is a story about three giants of Urdu literature, who got embroiled in a bizarre controversy that, even though it’s very much real, seems a figment of the fertile imagination of the three luminaries — a poet, a critic, and a fiction writer. One commonality among them is their love and passion for the language; the other a facetious controversy that has bonded them together — mostly against their wishes. One is Shamsur Rahman Faruqi: the arch critic of the day, another is Intizar Hussain: the leading fiction writer of our times, and then the poet, Zafar Iqbal: Urdu’s foremost ghazal poet.

This story like any spicy one is based on little facts, more hearsay, and exaggerated claims with no end in sight — almost in the same order.

It begins with “once upon a time” too; some twenty years ago, when Shamsur Rahman Faruqi in his book, ‘Sher e Shor Angez’, mentioned the new experiments and techniques being carried out in the ghazal genre. He cited some references to Ghalib and Mir Taqi Mir, and spoke highly of Zafar Iqbal. He wrote, “In Mir’s ghazal under discussion, we see a purity, self-righteousness, wryness and, what’s more, control of expression and tonal dignity. All these things can also be found in the best couplets of Zafar Iqbal’s anti-ghazal.”

This four-volume book is an exhaustive examination of Mir Taqi Mir and an attempt to rediscover his poetics that has been lost during the tumult of the 1857. The modus operandi of Faruqi in that grand book is that he picks up a couplet from Mir and then, after explicating it, quotes related couplets from other poets as well and, in the process, points out their merits and demerits.

He consistently puts Mir at the highest pedestal and constantly compares others with him. He invariably denigrates poets like Atish, Mus’hafi, Hasrat, Firaq, Faiz and Faraz. According to Zafar Syed, an upcoming Urdu literary figure: “Of the recent poets, he always waxes eloquent about Zafar Iqbal and puts him head and shoulders above the likes of Faiz. He lauds Zafar Iqbal’s cosmos-encompassing passion and his facility to laugh at himself.” Here’s one she’r that Faruqi particularly praises: Like gold glittered my corpse till morning; which venom’s pallor was (hidden) in the breath’s sting

taa subh damaktii rahii sonaa sii

merii laash;

kis zeher ki zardii thii zafar naish

e nafas mein

Shamsur Rahman in the same book wrote further: “Faiz, Firaq, Jigar, etc., suffer from the problem of psychological insecurity. Same with Fani ... because they were not self-aware. This self-awareness has only been granted to Zafar Iqbal.” The aged ghazal critic was not off the mark when he appreciated Zafar Iqbal. In his first book titled, ‘Aab e Ravaan’ Zafar used the same old traditional metaphors, but gave them a new and vigorous life:

hazaar uzr taraashe bahaar e

laala farosh

maiN apna hissa gulistaaN se

le ke Taltaa hoon!

and

paRe du’aaeN barhna saree ko do

k yahaaN

jinheN kulaah ka Khatra thaa un

kaa sar bhii gayaa

also ..

yahaaN kisee ko bhi kuch hasb e

aarzoo na milaa

kisii ko ham na mile aur kisee ko

tuu na milaa

To break the rules; you need to know the rules. Zafar Iqbal very cleverly established that he knows the rules and henceforth can break them with ease. He totally deviated from the old traditions, and introduced new subjects in his 1966 book, ‘Gul Aftab’. The mixture of Punjabi proverbs, simple wordings, and telling-it-like-it-is phrases and expressions elevated his stature. Consider these lines:

kis ke liye haree huvee har

shaaKh jism kee

“bai-mausmaa” khilaa hai ye

gulzaar kis liye

and the touch of Punjabi into Urdu ghazal poetry can be gauged from this one:

hum us ke vo “hor kisee” kaa,

pakkee puKhta Doree

apnaa dil apnaa mazhab, kyaa

jhagRaa choon chunaaN kaa!

Poetic diction like this ruffled a lot of critical feathers, but on the other hand some quarters lauded it. Shamsur Rahman Faruqi, as part of the admirers, called the experiment refreshing. It was all lace and potpourri, until Zafar Iqbal came out saying that Faruqi has called him a greater poet than Ghalib. This claim was enough to raise many an eyebrow.

Intizar Hussain in his subtle way never challenged it, but he did, however, write that this claim has been put forward by Zafar Iqbal himself.

What’s known is that Shamsur Rahman Faruqi never wrote any elaborated article on Zafar Iqbal, or made any comparisons of his work to Ghalib or Mir. He just praised Zafar Iqbal’s talent. And that acknowledgement of Zafar Iqbal’s talent triggered the controversy which should not have happened in the first place, let alone continue to the present day.

Zafar Iqbal in one of his columns claimed that Faruqi has said, “Zafar Iqbal is a greater poet than Ghalib.” The accounts of how Iqbal reached this conclusion are fuzzy, but others remained ‘skeptical’ because of their regard for Shamsur Rahman Faruqi and his work of critique.

The dust had not settled yet when Iqbal quite conveniently changed names and citations of his earlier claim. He moved a step ahead and said that he has also been compared with other ‘larger-than-life’ poets and not just Ghalib.

Talking to TNS, Zafar Iqbal said that Shamsur Rahman Faruqi in another book, on the construction and comparisons of new and old ghazal style, titled ‘Lafz o Maani’, has called him a greater poet than Ghalib.

Iqbal admitted that he has not been able to get hold of the book, and has not read it. He said that Dr Shamim Hanfi had told him that ‘Lafz o Maani’ states the above line. Keep in mind, it’s the same Dr Shamim Hanfi who praised Shamsur Rahman Faruqi’s work and has said that, “this era of critique could also be called the era of Faruqi.”

Putting words in Hanfi’s mouth appears an attempt to give more credibility to the claim Zafar honours himself with. He told TNS that Shamsur Rahman Faruqi has said that “after Devaan e Ghalib; his book ‘Gul Aftab’ is the ‘groundbreaking’ book of Urdu ghazal.”

In June 2012, Zafar Iqbal wrote a piece for literary magazine Tastir, in which he said: “Shamsur Rahman Faruqi declared me a greater  poet than Ghalib; like the rest I was not happy with it too since I am still writing.” Zafar Iqbal even today appears quite hesitant yet at the same time propagates the lofty claim.

Interestingly, Shamsur Rahman Faruqi or Intizar Hussain are not the only ones who have been dragged into this wrangle. In May 2009 edition of ‘Dunyazad’, Zafar Iqbal claimed that Jaun Elya had an argument with Faruqi as latter insisted that Zafar was a greater  poet than — get this — Firaq Gorakhpuri.

Again, in the same magazine, he declared that apparently, Gopichand Narang at a literary conference in London stated that, “if there was no Urdu language there would not have been Mir or Ghalib. And if there was no Urdu language there would have been no Zafar Iqbal — who is the highest ghazal writer of the subcontinent.”

The buck does not stop here either. Quite recently, in one of his columns in ‘Dunya’ newspaper, Zafar Iqbal took on Intizar Hussain and claimed more. He wrote that his son Aftab Iqbal on a visit to India called Shamsur Rahman Faruqi. The renowned critic once again praised Zafar Iqbal but this time matched him with Mir Taqi Mir. He reiterated this claim while talking to TNS.

This apparent sense of insecurity and self promotion with fruitless comparisons is hurting Zafar Iqbal’s reputation; as well as putting his well-wishers in doubts. Islamabad-based poet, Ali Muhammad Farshi believes that Ghalib was the curator of modern sensibility in Urdu ghazal. He says that Zafar Iqbal did break away from the traditional ghazal writing; and introduced new but laid-back structure. “How it will influence the upcoming ghazal poets is yet to be seen,” he said.

This “claim-game” also kick started a debate in the public domain, where Zafar Iqbal and Intizar Hussain wrote columns and articles.

Intizar Hussain wrote about Urdu conference held in Karachi last year, and in passing reference mentioned Zafar Iqbal’s claim. (‘Daily Express’ Dec 17, 2012). Zafar Iqbal in return “twisted” that point, and wrote a column. (‘Dunya’ Dec 20, 2012). Intizar Hussain wrote another piece (Daily Express Dec 21, 2012) and refused to indulge any further. In a nutshell, the conversation was something like this:

Zafar Iqbal: Intizar says that Faruqi has called me a better poet than Ghalib.

Intizar Hussain: Zafar Iqbal claims that he is better than Ghalib.

Zafar Iqbal: Faruqi told my son that I’m comparable to Mir.

Intizar Hussain: Woohoo! (Good for you, man!)

No doubt, that Zafar Iqbal’s stature has to be defined by time. It could take years or decades, but Zafar himself says that no great poet is recognised in his own time. “It took Ghalib more than a century to be accepted,” he said, hinting that the opposition to his claim stems from jealousy. This statement about Ghalib has no feet to run. Ghalib was very popular in his own era, and his poetry and collection of letters were treasured in his own lifetime.

It seems that Zafar Iqbal wants to get to that undying fame in his own lifetime. Meanwhile, his own “black-and-white” poetic creations are coming under scrutiny. Especially, these lines:

khil rahii thii kalii safaid

kuch havaa bhi chalii safaid

sabaz shalwaar per kameez

lag rahii thii bhalii safaid

or

likh raha hoon ghazal siyaah

haii koi chal sou chal siyaah

vohii ujlii hai ji, zafar

baat ho bar-mahal siyaah

Zafar Iqbal endlessly mentions Shamsur Rahman Faruqi to strengthen his stature; but there are others who oppose this implication and seek evidence of any and all comparisons. “What haunts Zafar is that he wants to be the greatest ghazal poet, and for that he depends on others and collects citations that praise him, or attacks other poets so that he could climb on their shoulders and then could prove himself taller than the rest,” says Urdu fiction writer and critic Hameed Shahid, adding, “this is totally uncalled for. He has established his identity through his two books, “Aab e Ravaan,” and “Gul Aaftab.”

Poets, as you know, could be legends, trend-setters, motivators, influential and a lot more; depending on the relevance of their work. Sometime this work empowers mass movements, and sometimes it embellishes the language, with the addition of new diction and coining of new metaphors, phrases and even words.

Mir and Ghalib’s poetry is overwhelmingly regarded as the best out there. It’s one of the reasons that their popularity never shrank. The ghazal is still making progress with the passage of time. It’s developing and Zafar Iqbal has made a huge contribution to this. He has to leave it to the time to attest and readers to decide where he stands in ghazal poetry.

As T.S. Eliot aptly puts it: “Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion; it is not the expression of personality, but an escape from personality. But, of course, only those who have personality and emotions know what it means to want to escape from these things.” Unfortunately, Zafar Iqbal is not letting his personality escape.

 

 

 

 

New lessons
Talbot’s approach, of going deeper into the past of Pakistan and the kind of state that was created needed to be examined, investigated and properly understood, is the right one
By Sarwat Ali

Ian Talbot has written extensively about Pakistan. In his latest publication ‘Pakistan: A New History’ he has actually levelled the reasons for most of the problems that Pakistan faced in history.

In that way, there is nothing new about the history of the country if one has to delve deep into the past to unearth the real causes for the disarray that the country is in it at present.

Though one wonders why the book has been titled the ‘A New History’ if one had to fish into the waters of the past. It is difficult to look back and say that a certain period was not that chaotic or it seemed that the country was on a path of consolidation.

Retrospectively speaking, the constitution-making crisis to the secession of East Pakistan and from the overthrow of Zulfikar Ali Bhutto’s democratically elected government to four dismissals of elected governments and the three martial laws was enough to give sleepless nights to anyone. The country has forever been in the throes of various problems.

Actually Talbot’s approach is the correct one to take because most of the problems that lie in history shape the future as well. When Pakistan was created, suddenly in a seven-year-struggle after the Pakistan Resolution in 1940, serious doubts were raised about the reasons for its creation and because of that the chances of its survival.

Though it had survived the first twenty five years and then, in a truncated form, the next forty odd years it has been the cause of instability in the region and a nightmare to most of the powers that have been fishing for a hefty catch in the pursuit of their global intentions.

Because of it being vulnerable, Pakistan has also been amenable to manipulation on terms and conditions that were not always to its full advantage. Its joining the Cold War was a step taken that brought in more disadvantages than advantages in the sense that it spilt the country’s insecurity into areas that were of an international nature, thus making the rest of the world, particularly India, viewing local problems in the international context. There was also a reason for India to scuttle the process of solving the local issues by citing an international cause and in that it found ready allies and supporters.

Most of the writers who have written on the country have only focussed on the recent past. The main area of investigation has been the Zia ul Haq era and most of the problems that the country faces are laid at the door of that eleven-year-period. But the real question is why the country has not been able to reverse that slide even after more than twenty years. It appears that Talbot’s approach, of going deeper into the past and the kind of state that was created needed to be examined, investigated and properly understood is right.

Though Talbot does not consider security threats as the biggest problems facing Pakistan — the graver problems are the issues of governance, the need for national consensus, water and energy security and above all the demographic time bomb and the youth bulge.

Due to the various international causes Pakistan has been able to muddle through but he feels that unless the above-cited problems are not tackled head-on it will not be possible for Pakistan to muddle through any more. He thinks these challenges are bigger than what Pakistan has ever faced.

And unless there is a major turnaround in the national policy direction, a catastrophe is waiting to happen. He levels the responsibility on the leaders and the people of the country, and he is hopeful that once that happens the external well-wishers will be willing to come forth through financial and technical assistance. This will result in South Asia realising its fuller potential and especially its economic one, otherwise the failure of a nuclear weapons Pakistan will have regional and global repercussions. It has to move towards economic sustainability and democratic consolidation.

What has been disquietening and very disturbing is that in the last sixty five years, or forty one years, Pakistan has not been able to overcome the legacy of the colonial state. In other words it has not been able to resolve some of the structural problems that it inherited. This is a very sorry commentary on the either the lack of realisation of the problems or the lack on consensus on the resolution of the problem. It could also be that it was thought that probably it was a better option to manage them on short term basis the affairs of the state. The adhocism, the patron client relationship and then the ease with which foreign assistance was accepted and even asked for have been the shameful areas that need to be addressed. Even now the main refrain is that the people and the country have been wronged and victimised. The assumption being that the rest of the world is wrong and that we are right has created a mindset which is as entrenched as the jihadi mindset that provides legitimacy to the chosen people to set the world right according to their worldview.

It appears that there is still no consensus as many believe this to be the only way to manage the affairs of a country. Not many are willing to challenge the givens of the situation and, therefore, the future does not look as sanguine as it may to somebody like Ian Talbot.

Title: Pakistan: A New History

Author: Ian Talbot

Publisher: Columbia

University Press, 2012

Pages: 224

Price: 895 PKR

 

 

 

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